Your 10 thoughts and insights from the talk were very similar to mine if not the same, so I agree with the ideas you chose to put down. Your insights about how Erik continuing his art work till his late stages of illness were very powerful, I agree with your ideas and think you got into depth and really focused on how he didn't let his illness stop him from doing things he enjoyed. Your last couple of questions confused me a bit and I didn't see how they connected, next time you can possibly explain your question and how it connects. Other then that I'm looking forward to your next post.
Megumi's blog comment:
Your 9 insights from the speaker were powerful and you went into depth with each one which made your blog powerful. Your connection to your grandfather in the first paragraph was a great way to connect everything together and it really showed how much Beth's words affected you. One thing I would say to do is to proof read because I saw a couple of gramatical and spelling mistakes. Other then that i look forward to reading your other post.
Jay's blog comment:
The way you chose to list your insights and experiences was creative. unlike other blogs you intertwined the insights into your paragraphs and explained them with depth and thought. I believe if you connected your thoughts to yourself in more depth your pst could have been more powerful. other then that i really enjoyed reading your work and I look forward to reading more.
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